In me thou see'st the glowing of such fire
That on the ashes of his youth doth lie
As the deathbed whereon it must expire,
Consumed with that which it was nourished by.
In other words:
You see the glowing remnants of a fire in meIn this last quatrain the speaker is admitting that death is around the corner, and uses fire as a metafor for the remaining fragility of his life. In lines two and four of this quatrain he references the fact that ashes, or what nourished his life, are now the cause of his downfall. Ashes most likely refers to youth, and how in a cylical nature, youth consumes the life of the old. By presenting the final couplet almost as final words they are given much more power, and this helps to heed the message of carpe diem.
That is resting on ashes, while being consumed by them
I will soon die, and so must my fire extinguish
The fire will be destroyed by what originally fed it
The form of this poem contributes greatly to its value. Each of the three quatrains increase in intensity from season to day to fire, and thus serve to originally set the stage for death, and then indicate its urgency. Also, because each quatrain contains an ABAB rhyming scheme, it helps to format the poem into four distinct sections. The formatting on the final heroic couplet is indented which separates it and presents it as a conclusion.
Poetic form, in contrast to prose, allows several literary techniques which enhance the value of the poem, and add to its meaning. As I said, the rhyming scheme helps to give the poem a clear formatting, and present it as a more packaged and complete point with clear flow. The poetic form also invokes a lot of imagery, which contributes to the power of the poem. The structure of iambic pentameter adds to the poem by adding a sing songy nature, and in a way romanticizes the work. If Sonnet 73 was written as prose it would still make the same point, but lack the grace, the beauty, the imagery, and thus not deliver the final couplet with the emphasis and conviction that the form contributes.

3 comments:
I thought that you summed up what we discussed in class nicely. I really enjoy the different sections of the poem and I think that was an important point to illustrate.
I really thought your idea about romanticizing the poem was right on. Shakespeare has an amazing ability to make in death sound beautiful.
"If Sonnet 73 was written as prose it would still make the same point, but lack the grace, the beauty, the imagery, and thus not deliver the final couplet with the emphasis and conviction that the form contributes."
Your totally right on that one! I like this "what if" its given me a better understanding off poetry terminology and why things are done a certain day. I'm poetry illiterate and i can proudly say I understand a little more about it then before.
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